Hi Jeremy. Thanks for your comments on my stories. It's nice to know that my tv style works and that other people like it. Thanks for the tip about the background picture too - I'm not much of a techie person, so I'll see if I can make that better.
Hi Jeremy! I just wanted to thank you for the helpful comment that you made on my storytelling post for week 6! I could tell that you actually read my story thoroughly and offered your honest thoughts about it. You said you loved that I make an effort to keep the story to its main plot, but that I change it up enough to make it intriguing to the reader, and honestly that is exactly what I try to do. I was really excited that you noticed that and it made me feel like I was going in the right direction with my storytelling posts! Thanks again!
Hey Jeremy. I really appreciate your feedback on my storybook. I actually considered doing a collage of all of the brothers in my storybook for the coverpage, but when I made the coverpage I still hadn’t decided on which sets of brothers I wanted to use. Since my intro pretty much defined all of the characters, it would probably be a good idea for me to go back and update the picture. Thanks for the suggestions and I look forward to your feedback in the next few weeks!
Hey Jeremy! Thank you for your sweet comment on my Golden Deer storytelling post. Horror is one of my favorite genres to watch and read so I'm really glad I could do it some justice! Did you every write a horror/mystery piece? They're a lot of fun! Anyway, thank you, thank you for your feedback!
Hey Jeremy! I wanted to thank you for your comments, in particular for your comment on my story "Illusion, Shadow, and the Passage of Time." I was really going out on a limb with the whole time/death dichotomy, and it was great to see such a positive response to it. I can't believe that you thought that you were reading an external source; that seriously bolsters my confidence, haha. Thank you again!
Hi Jeremy. Thanks for your comments on my stories. It's nice to know that my tv style works and that other people like it. Thanks for the tip about the background picture too - I'm not much of a techie person, so I'll see if I can make that better.
ReplyDeleteHi Jeremy! I just wanted to thank you for the helpful comment that you made on my storytelling post for week 6! I could tell that you actually read my story thoroughly and offered your honest thoughts about it. You said you loved that I make an effort to keep the story to its main plot, but that I change it up enough to make it intriguing to the reader, and honestly that is exactly what I try to do. I was really excited that you noticed that and it made me feel like I was going in the right direction with my storytelling posts! Thanks again!
ReplyDeleteHey Jeremy. I really appreciate your feedback on my storybook. I actually considered doing a collage of all of the brothers in my storybook for the coverpage, but when I made the coverpage I still hadn’t decided on which sets of brothers I wanted to use. Since my intro pretty much defined all of the characters, it would probably be a good idea for me to go back and update the picture. Thanks for the suggestions and I look forward to your feedback in the next few weeks!
ReplyDeleteHey Jeremy! Thank you for your sweet comment on my Golden Deer storytelling post. Horror is one of my favorite genres to watch and read so I'm really glad I could do it some justice! Did you every write a horror/mystery piece? They're a lot of fun! Anyway, thank you, thank you for your feedback!
ReplyDeleteHey Jeremy! I wanted to thank you for your comments, in particular for your comment on my story "Illusion, Shadow, and the Passage of Time." I was really going out on a limb with the whole time/death dichotomy, and it was great to see such a positive response to it. I can't believe that you thought that you were reading an external source; that seriously bolsters my confidence, haha. Thank you again!
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