His father responded, "My beautiful and strong elephant, you have been held under captivity for far too long. I will permit this request. Let me coordinate.with some of my associates so I will know that you will be under supervision of safely watching eyes."
Siddhartha's father sent his most trustworthy guards and associates around to clean up the streets around the palace. The father knew what Siddhartha needed this trip to clear his mind and conscience, bit this did not mean that Siddhartha needed to see evvery unsightly detail. The king even went so far as to pay the taverns nearby to close their doors for the day. The king thought this would keep the regular patrons from contaminating the beautiful mind of his Siddhartha.
After his final finishing touches on cleaning and decorating the city, the king returned home to Siddhartha to give him permission to travel out on the next morning. Siddhartha, who originally would have been ecstatic to finally escape the confines of the palace, s
eemed aloof upon hearing his father's words. Siddhartha thought to himself, "I made this request of my father so that I may see the good and bad of the world for what it is.But now, I fear that I may not be able to handle the sadness and treachery that exists in the real world." He decided to sleep on it, which only lead to the same sequence of dreams he had the night before.
Wikipedia |
Author's note:
For my story, I decided to adapt Siddhartha's first encounter outside of the city. I thought it might be interesting to incorporate some level of premonition on Siddhartha's journey through his dreams. I tried to make it apparent that the father's efforts to coddle and protect Siddhartha would be pointless -- which is also sort of the moral of my story.
Link to Life of Buddha
Hey Jeremy! So I have not read the story that this is referencing, and so just have your retelling to go off of in my comments. Honestly, the most striking thing that I noticed in your story were the dramatic contrasts. The fact that one man's dreams mirrored the violent reality of the people around him, while that man's sheltered reality would reflect the dreams of those living the reality of a violent world. And while I understand the father's reluctance to show the real world to his son, you have to wonder whether the son's ignorance will just make him vulnerable later in life. Anyway, great job!
ReplyDeleteHey Jeremy,
ReplyDeleteI haven't read the story you're talking about so it was very interesting to read. I the approach you took; you used a good amount of detail without making it too overwhelming. I think it's very cool that you incorporated Siddhartha's dreams into your story. I like it all a lot. I'll definitely be looking to read more of your stories as the smelter goes on. Great job!