Showing posts with label Week 2. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 2. Show all posts

Monday, October 27, 2014

Storytelling Wk. 2: Tale From the Riverside

Source: Wikipedia
"Dad, I don't think there's another river quite like the Ganges," said the boy, as he was gently nestled into his bed. "But why must the Ganges flow so much and so violently?"

His father softly responded, "The Ganges has its own story that explains its mysterious ways. Our family name, Samprashana, means 'friends of wings' and this is because our ancestors were close companions to the river cranes on the Ganges. It is said that a crane would land on the window sill each morning and greet our ancestors, exchanging a story for a small token of nourishment." The father dimmed the lights in the room and continued, 'Be still, my son, for here is one of the many stories our ancestors have passed down to us."

While the crane was not there to see it from the beginning, he was a very close friend to the mother of the Earth. Because the crane was clever and observant, Mother trusted him with keeping tabs on the living creatures of the valley and their needs. It was mostly a menial quest. Sometimes he would report about a quarrel between mongooses, or he would tell the mother of an intense battle between two great hawks. Eventually a whole new creature appeared in the valley. This beast made the land work for him. It called itself man.

Men were intelligent, emotional, violent, and amazing, the crane thought. Unfortunately, this ability led them to even threaten some of the gods. Men could move quickly on the backs of other animals, and were often haughty enough to challenge the gods to races. One day, a man started a race against one of the gods, and while the god was very powerful, he had not practiced enough riding the horse. The man could make the quickest of turns, highest of jumps, and stop without hurting his horse. This man made the god utterly furious. The god then hid the man's horse in the sunless underworld.

The man could no longer race the gods and thus felt powerless. He made it his lifelong quest to find his racehorse, but after millions of excavations it seemed he would be forever the simple human that he was. At the ancient age of five thousand he finally discovered the horse in the light-less world and he died there of happiness. The god was pleased that his challenger had been defeated, and he began to boast to all of the other men in the world.

The crane could tell that the men were unhappy with how their brother was treated and led to die. They began to rebel against the earth, putting their waste and trash directly into the earth. The crane pleaded to Mother, "We must ease their sorrow or else your beauty will be ruined!" Mother, stricken with grief, cried down from the high heavens and washed the valley and the sunless place with her tears. Her sadness was so terrible that the entire valley began to flood away. The crane knew what he had to do. He dove straight down with the strongest of strikes. The sheer force of his dive made folds in the land that rose up and made what today is the Himalayas. Mother's flood was thus corralled by the mighty mountains, and the river began to look much like it does today.

He had managed to nourish the people's shores, wash away the remains of the man and his horse, and also serve his divine purpose.

"Good night, my little crane," whispered the father as the light washed away.

Sarus Crane - Wikipedia



Author's note:

The story I tried to re-tell was the Ganges Story from the Ramayana (Narayan, R. K. (1972) The Ramayana.)

In the original story, Sakara is a fortunate ruler who has planned out a great horse sacrifice. This sacrifice involves the passing of a decorated horse through each area of a country, and this passage is a declaration of the ruler's power. Any opposition to the horse is an act of war. This is where Indra comes in, or the man in my story. Indra goes on to hide the horse behind a meditating saint. Sakara's sons are assigned to dig until they find Sakara's horse. They finally discover Indra's hiding place and the saint is wrongly accused of stealing the horse. This saint is then tortured. This leads to Bhagiratha, similar to the crane in the story, agreeing with Shiva to help avoid the full wrath of Ganga descending upon the earth. The tortured saint thus receives salvation, and the valley is not wiped out by the powerful Ganga.

I tried to refrain from using many of the names in the story because I think the story should appeal on a general level, like a fable. I also changed the horse sacrifice in the Ganges story to a race, mainly because I think a boy would find a race with gods to be very exciting. The crane also took some of the roles that multiple characters did in the story because I wanted him to be the most heroic crane a boy could imagine. 

Tuesday, September 2, 2014

Famous Last Words - Week 2


I chose to make a story out of the Ramayana tale of the Ganges and while I thought that my writing for this week's storytelling was written much better, but it didn't feel like something I would write. It needed more of a touch of my writing, yet I can't figure out what to add. I think the most common story I found from browsing my peers' blogs was some sort of incorporation of the golden deer. I would like to know if this theme was caused by a prompt or if everyone found the story of the deer to be inherently interesting. The most interesting story I read was a scary mystery version of the golden deer tale. I would like to incorporate some mystery and/or horror into a story of my own.

I felt like this past week was a complete and utter blur. It certainly did not help make things better that we were short staffed for each of my shifts at Couch.

This weekend was my first football game as a student and not a member of the Pride of Oklahoma Marching Band. I thought my band friends did outstanding, and the football was great, too. I'm not so certain that I like sitting among the student section. I don't miss rehearsals, but it just feels wrong to not be behind the band. I hope I can get to the stadium early enough to do that against Tennessee.

Outside of school:
I absolutely need to buckle down about getting my admissions exam out of the way for optometry school. I put way too much on my plate over the summer with the classes and work I was doing. Because of that awfulness, I never got around to taking the test and now I have to figure out a way to take it before Christmas hopefully. Wish me luck.

Wednesday, August 27, 2014

Week 2: Reading Diary B

Rama's Departure:

Lakshmana cares about his brother's right to be king despite their evil mother that he is willing to go into exile with Rama and Sita. Not only has Lakshmana become enraged, people of the town appear ill and distraught over his departure. Lakshmana jokes about at least being allowed to leave into exile at their own pace. Rama shows a unique discipline to verbal agreements and the right of his other brother to be the king. The king's love for Rama was so much that his departure into the night ended his life.

Bharata:

Bharata has an amazing response to his mother's exile of Rama. Bharata is so upset that he vows to kill his mother, and only decides against it because of his devotion to Rama's beliefs. The land apparently goes without a king for over 5 days, only asking Bharata to become king after mourning. In Bharata's pursuit of bringing back Rama, he decides to bring a throng of citizens. I think this is setting him up for failure, as Rama has never been one to bend just because a large group of people request something. Is there something symbolic about wearing tree bark armor? Otherwise it seems as if the armor is just aesthetic.

Bharata's argument with Rama best represents the great man Rama is. They spend most of their time telling one another to whom the kingship belongs. The debate is so gentlemanly, and only ends once Rama convinces his brother to act as a temporary representative of Rama

ashram - a spiritual center of hermitage

Encounters in Exile:

The forest surrounding his land is apparently inhabited well enough that Rama must go deeper to successfully exile. He encounters a maiden related to the demon he is destined to defeat. Rama has a great moral compass to the point where he sees perfect beauty, yet still manages to feel uneasy about her motives. Despite her best attempts at loopholing the caste system, Rama remains professor-like in his discounting of her logic. I found it odd that Rama found this demon maiden so astonishingly attractive, but then when the demon maiden met Sita, she called out Sita for being too pretty to not be other-worldly. Rama also threatens the demon maiden with the appearance of his brother, instead of threatening to do something himself. Lakshmana was merciful enough to not kill this lady, but only cut off her ears, nose and breast! What mercy!

Soorpanka's need to accompany the trio through the forest seems to only foreshadow bad things to come once the demon maiden's family learns of what has happened to her beautiful face and breasts. The Ravana family is far too stubborn. You have Soorpanka who cannot be refused as a lover or a companion. Then the brothers are so set on proving a point that they will willingly be slaughtered by a single man. Ravanas need a little Rama in them.

Rama exhibits his superhuman fighting prowess, using a combo of bow and sword to single-handedly defeat demon squadrons. While I know Rama has had great training, it's strange to imagine someone who has lived mostly a city life having that kind of mercenary ability.

Ravana:
-Too quick to fall in love and envious, easily falls for Sita just based on a description.
- Volatile in his anger as well.
- Despite having a mutilated sister, he appears to be more concerned about stealing Sita then avenging Shurpanka.
- Cunning planner











Monday, August 25, 2014

Reading Diary A: Week 2

Page 1:

I can't help but notice the first parenthetical, a women of pleasure stealing goods from a patron. I don't quite understand why the sentence is in parentheses and quotations as well. Can I get a footnote?

Page 4:

I find it interesting that the King depends on his mentor for his dynasty issues. You would think a King of his stature could easily find a way to bolster his lineage.I suppose him being 'childless' might also just be an archaic way of saying he was infertile.

The gods also apparently have a dire situation and need a person who can defeat their demon. These situations seem unrelated at this point.

Page 8:

The sage knows that Rama can help defeat the dragon, and I can sense that the King knows the sage knows that. With how quickly the sage is willing to leave the King's presence after being turned down, it sounds like the sage knew the King would give in all along. This plays into the "I know your son" statement that the sage talked about with Vishna
It's interesting that the King is willing to let both sons go after once toiling over having at least one person to continure the lineage.

Page 12:

Rama was only given the esoteric astrahs once he defeated the demon. I think these techniqures would have been very useful while the demigod was raining them with stones.
Vishnu also tells another story of a previous life where he destroys a tormentor of the world.

Ganges Story:

I briefly described part of this story in one of the storybook posts from orientation week. The gods apparently frown upon horse sacrifices to the point where they hide them underground. One of the surviving members does his best to establish the rivers and oceans of today.

Ahalya:

This story is one of pure god jealousy and competition. Indra had to have this woman that was destined for Gautama, but despite this he insisted on having her.This resulted in her petrification, and his disfigurement.

Rama & Sita:

Rama and Sita finally meet. They're a match made in 'heaven', seeing as they're both ignorant of their former lives before reincarnation. Sita is struck by complete heartbreak at the first sight of Rama, to the point where her attendants think she is ill.

Because of King Janaka's great gift he received as his daughter, he could only allow those to marry her if they could pass an Excalibur-like test, bending the Shiva bow. It's odd that the King regrets snaring her future with that bow, even though there are many other tough tasks that fathers can prescribe for their daughter's suitors. Rama succeeds and despite their divine connection, Sita has no idea her suitor has won her until a maid notifies her.

I found the ceremony and especially its setting to be tough to decipher. The gist I got was that even the most deplorable and unhappiest of people managed to appreciate the beauty of the couple that was about to marry.

Two Promises:

Rama's father, the King is finally acknowledging his age. I found it funny that a poet originally had him aged at over 60,000 years old. It is then denoted that whatever the age was, he was definitely ripened.
Rama, as a successor, seems like an obvious choice. However, I don't think we actually know what Rama is proficient at besides being a good man and warrior.
The King proposes to not let Rama's brother know of his immediate crowning, essentially because Rama should ask for forgiveness rather than permission to take the crown instead of his brother.

A bad mistake is made when the King owes his wife (Rama's mother) two promises. The apparently suicidal wife uses one of her promises to have another brother of Rama become king and have Rama exiled. This noticeably hurts the King and father, possibly on an emotional and physical level.

The interesting part is that the King was interested in doing his business while the other two sons were away, while the mother wished for Rama to be exiled for 14 years. Either she knows something he doesn't, or it's really just inter-family favoritism.

Despite this unkindness, Rama does not judge his mother, and similarly blames himself for this outcome. He concludes that not only is this his fault, but also heaven's plan. The entire kingdom is apparently against Rama's wicked mother, yet he decides to respect her promise. Thi cannot be a good start to a new King's reign.